I really liked it, it touches you .. your voice is raw an makes me feel the song so Great Job and keep it up... you should upload it to youtube and tag me in your new music posts. [[lm.pawsup]]
i LOVE the piano parts. beautiful intro and accompaniment.
i think you should work on your voice a little. it appears to be quite nasal. try to sind the worlds more clearly and also louder & prouder.
i like your slight accent! :)
keep up the good work!!