Kinga! OMG, dear God, this is another perfect typography! I again like the mix of mediums! It is extremely beautiful! I actually think that the crayon is really more beautifully applied to this piece. It maybe that her blonde hair is so beautiful and I favor her as a blonde that I am drawn into this piece. Even as critiquing art, the critiques by the person must be kept in a neutral behavior to adequately give positive, constructive critiques. I really am excited about this piece. I admit that I do favor it as I love the blonde hair! Thus, your other typography with crayon is just as striking to your audience! I am extremely proud of you and your hard work!